Once I had done my first draft of my script I Gave it out to people within my target audience for them to tell me what they enjoyed about it and what needed to be done to better it. Firstly I think some of them were confused by the layout but within the video game industy, to the trained eye thats how its meant to look. I asked around 10 people and gave them a quick spped through of my script to see how they enjoyed it and they all came back with positive responses, I then took a step deeper and asked 4 of those to write down speacifically what they enjoyed or any evaluation they had for me. A lot of them said that My story held an 'interesting concept' and a 'unique narrative'. Furthermore, two of them said that from the introduction that the atmosphere created from the description and illustrations that would be present is good.
Some criticism that they gave was that I could use some more dialogue and ontop of that actual names which is a key essientail I have yet to add. Additionally, The first person I actually gave the script to and gained feedback from did say that it was a little bit confusing but after I explained some bits alongside showing him the story board says it sounded fun. This isn't the worst thing as often video games start off a little blank so that the audience continue to play in order to fill them and find out more which is what I have attempted to do, propose some questions right of the bat!
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